Wake Up, Little Susie

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Wake Up, Little Susie

February 22, 2017 by Corina

photo by Sarah Potter

Susie headed toward the door. She had allowed just the right time to run across the street and through the yards five blocks down to her house. She would climb up the tree and into her bedroom window with just enough time to get into her nightgown before her mother came in to wake her. Susie always had perfect timing.

Opening the door of her boyfriend’s apartment building, Susie couldn’t believe her eyes! It couldn’t be. It hadn’t been in the forecast. Now her secret outings would be uncovered.

If the snow didn’t, her mother was going to kill her!

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on February 22, 2017 at 3:05 am | Reply neilmacdon

Sweet

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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:07 pm | Reply Corina
  
  Thank you.
  
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on February 22, 2017 at 4:19 am | Reply rochellewisoff

Dear Corina,

Your title will have my ears singing all day. It does look like Susie is in a bit of jam. Nicely done.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:07 pm | Reply Corina
  
  Yup, that song is in my head today. Thank you for reading.
  
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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:40 pm | Reply Dale
  
  Me too! Immediately upon reading it!
  
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on February 22, 2017 at 5:54 am | Reply Snow's Fissures and Fractures

Troubles of young souls, I used to think my problems were so big. Nicely done.

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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:06 pm | Reply Corina
  
  Thank you!
  
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on February 22, 2017 at 5:58 am | Reply Magaly Guerrero

Nature has such a twisted sense of humor. I’m pretty sure I heard her chuckle as poor Susie imagined her upcoming troubles.

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on February 22, 2017 at 6:21 am | Reply Iain Kelly

Great track and title, and a nice take on the prompt.

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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:06 pm | Reply Corina
  
  Thank you!
  
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on February 22, 2017 at 8:27 am | Reply James

Oops. Best laid plans.

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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:05 pm | Reply Corina
  
  Yes, one never knows what Mother Nature has planned for us.
  
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on February 22, 2017 at 12:18 pm | Reply jellico84

Ohhhh, that one brings back too too many memories. If Mom had ever found out… Well, I’m still alive, so I must be in the clear.

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- on February 22, 2017 at 1:04 pm | Reply Corina
  
  I’m glad she never found out!
  
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on February 22, 2017 at 1:41 pm | Reply Dale

Mother Nature can be cruel indeed! Hope she manages to cover her tracks!

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on February 22, 2017 at 3:19 pm | Reply Rommy

D’oh! Hopefully for Susie it will keep snowing through the night. That might cover her tracks some.

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on February 23, 2017 at 12:19 am | Reply neelwritesblog

Let the snow show up longer than usual for Susie’s sake.

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on February 23, 2017 at 7:03 am | Reply gahlearner

I guess she’ll survive that killing. Maybe she should talk to her grandma and extract a few stories about mum’s youth. Lovely story.

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on February 23, 2017 at 8:39 am | Reply Keith's Ramblings

Oh dear! I think she has a problem.

Click for my Friday Fiction

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on February 23, 2017 at 8:58 am | Reply Balaka

I can relate to her…this used to happen with me…Murphy’s law

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on February 23, 2017 at 9:34 am | Reply Life Lessons of a Dog Lover

Great fun!

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on February 24, 2017 at 12:06 pm | Reply mandibelle16

Oh man, that makes things difficult. Her foot prints, gees!

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on February 24, 2017 at 6:06 pm | Reply subroto

“Whatta we gonna tell your mama
Whatta we gonna tell your pa..”

Ok now thats playing in my head. Fun story.

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