
photo by Sarah Potter
Susie headed toward the door. She had allowed just the right time to run across the street and through the yards five blocks down to her house. She would climb up the tree and into her bedroom window with just enough time to get into her nightgown before her mother came in to wake her. Susie always had perfect timing.
Opening the door of her boyfriend’s apartment building, Susie couldn’t believe her eyes! It couldn’t be. It hadn’t been in the forecast. Now her secret outings would be uncovered.
If the snow didn’t, her mother was going to kill her!
100 Words, Fiction
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Sweet
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Thank you.
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Dear Corina,
Your title will have my ears singing all day. It does look like Susie is in a bit of jam. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Yup, that song is in my head today. Thank you for reading.
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Me too! Immediately upon reading it!
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Troubles of young souls, I used to think my problems were so big. Nicely done.
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Thank you!
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Nature has such a twisted sense of humor. I’m pretty sure I heard her chuckle as poor Susie imagined her upcoming troubles.
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Great track and title, and a nice take on the prompt.
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Thank you!
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Oops. Best laid plans.
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Yes, one never knows what Mother Nature has planned for us.
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Ohhhh, that one brings back too too many memories. If Mom had ever found out… Well, I’m still alive, so I must be in the clear.
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I’m glad she never found out!
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Mother Nature can be cruel indeed! Hope she manages to cover her tracks!
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D’oh! Hopefully for Susie it will keep snowing through the night. That might cover her tracks some.
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Let the snow show up longer than usual for Susie’s sake.
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I guess she’ll survive that killing. Maybe she should talk to her grandma and extract a few stories about mum’s youth. Lovely story.
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Oh dear! I think she has a problem.
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I can relate to her…this used to happen with me…Murphy’s law
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Great fun!
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Oh man, that makes things difficult. Her foot prints, gees!
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“Whatta we gonna tell your mama
Whatta we gonna tell your pa..”
Ok now thats playing in my head. Fun story.
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